2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Today,there is a commom phnomenon,excessive packaging.I think many of people have this kind of exprience that we buy a thing with a beautiful box but the thing itself is not as nice as we thought.What do lead to it? In my opinion,It's for two reasons.The first,the shoperman,in order to attract more customers,would make his goods more beautiful.The second,sometimes we buy a good not for useing but for giving it to others.So we would expect the goods looks well.because of customers's require,the exxcessive packaging then comes. For me,i think the phnomenon should be limitied.The excessive packaging goods offen more expensive.But we don't need to spend more money on a box.So I call on people unit to object to excessive packaging.Let's do it from the little thing and from now on.