作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。
Book is to us what sunlight is to flower.Some people hold the opinion that we should read the books which are chosen in order to that we can spend time on some books which is beneficial. Or people maybe waste time on meaningless book. Anther people think that people should read every kinds of books whether them meaningful or not.Because read more kinds of book,we know more other thing. In my opinions, the more books we can read the more knowledge we could acquire. Nowadays we faces more kinds of books,some is meaningful while something is not. we should often choose meaningful books, some meaningless books we could just dabble. I think it important for us to read books. It's a good habit if we like reading book.so i hope more and more people spend their time in reading books and acquire more knowledge.