2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；衔接成分偏少；连词使用偏少。

Many people believe that teaching children music makes them smarter, better able to learn new things. But the organizers of a new study say there's no scientific evidence that early musical training affects the intelligence of young people. An estimated 80 percent of American adults think music lessons improve children's ability to learn or their performance in school.