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During recent years,E(electronic)-books in mounting numbers are being used in our country.Many the online bookstore can sell E-book.We can notice such a phenomenon,such as dang dang online bookstore. Does anyone hold the same attitude towards E-book? Definitely not. Actually,opinion vary from person to person. From my individual perspective,I insist that E-book is better than traditional books.There are three chief reasons that may account for it.For one thing,the advantage of E-book is obvious,it can help our study more effective.For another,people are saving a great deal of time on reading,because E-book making reading more convenient.Thirdly, E-book can flavor to our daily life. Compared with the E-book and the traditional books,E-book is superior in many ways.So I prefer E-book.