题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
The arrival of the imformation age have moved the connect between computer and man closer to zero.Computer play a important role in our daily life.We can see it from school,office,even the government department.Infact,each coin has two sides. On the one hand,we are liberated from the busy work by computer,so that we have more time and leisure to do something that is more important and more interesting.Computer can also aid for calculation which is necessary.What's more,we can utilize the computer to communication,trade and management. On the other hand,serious problems are highlighted since the wide use of computer.Such as hackers,computer fraud and so on.But i have a favor of the use of computer. However,how man use computer will determine,to a large measure,the person used and the attitude.In this process we reasonable employ the computer.