2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

While twenty years ago, the name of computer was only known to a small number of people, the concept of "surf the internet" was widely accepted. According to a recent investigation, the percentage of the people who use the computer more than one hours per day is surprising high. It's hard to imagine what the world would be like whether the computer suddenly vanished from our life and work. Have you ever think the reason for this phenomenon? Firstly, with the development of technology, computer can replace us do a lot of things so that the people become more and more lazy. The people hates to work by their hands or brain. Secondly, the fulfilled information in the internet has appealed people to spent much time in it. It has some advantages and disadvantages. Thirdly, with the procession of society, communication plays a significant role in business. People can have a meeting by a computer wherever they are which save much time and money. However, on the contrary, computer also help us to do something more effective. As far as I'm concern, the advantage of computer is more than its disadvantage. As a saying goes "Every coin has two sides". We should improve the quality of internet rather than rid of use it.