2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是学术词汇的积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

With the development of society,the online shopping is becoming more and more popular in person's daily life. There are many good advantages in online shopping. Online shopping can save person's many times,and they can look though many goods.They also can do other things when they buy things online shopping.But one coin has two sides ,when they buy things online shopping,they can't see the real things .And when they buy a coat,if it is small or large,they should buy and change it.It will take the person a lot of time . In my opinion,buying something in online shopping can save our some time,but it isn't true sometimes.So if we want to buy something in reality ,we can go the shop to buy .