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2012年7月21日雅思大作文真题:The Fast Pace of Urban Development

发布时间:2013-07-23 15:57浏览次数:806
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【题目要求】In most cities and towns, the high volumes of road traffic become a problem. What are the causes of that and what actions can be taken to solve the problem?

【题目讲解】

解题思路:

第一段:提出‘车太多’的问题

第二段:问题的原因1农民工和小城市的年轻人涌向大城市就业导致人口剧增,城市扩大,出行距离增加;2 大城市交通设施落后,无法容纳剧增的车辆。3 国家政策鼓励人们买车,以刺激经济发展。

第三段:第一个措施,建立卫星城,疏散人口和城市资源。鼓励人们住在工作单位附近。

第四段:第二个措施,改善公交系统,鼓励人们乘坐。

第五段:第三个措施,抑制私家车的使用。

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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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In the most parts of world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate, coming with increasing reliance on private cars, which contributes to an overburdened road system. What is under controversy is how to reduce car dependency and control increasing car ownership. To be frank, I am in high favor that we are expected to be well aware of the traffic problem. In my view, the underlying problem is the fact that the fast pace of urban expansion. Overwhelming migrant worker and young people are flocking to the metropolises from small town in order to gain more job opportunities and have a comfortable living environment so that heavy overpopulation is inevitable. Apparently, the urban has to expand more to fulfill the demand of living, leading to the long distance between home and work place for a lot of people. Furthermore, the lack of the infrastructure construction also cannot meet the sharp increase in car ownership. Besides, government encourages people to purchase cars to stimulate the economy. The solution,I think,is for government to inject more funds into the construction of infrastructure, increase more construction, such as the restructuring of metro system, elevated ways, Pearl line, and superhighway. Also government should levy heavy tax on luxurious products, and encourage people to use bus service instead of private cars. To individuals, we may continue to carry out the family planning to control the growth of the population. Furthermore, we should publicize the importance of obeying the traffic regulations among people by education, and form the civil health lifestyle. Establishing satellite city is a good option as well. It not only can largely increase the capacity of city but also can attract more people to come in, providing adequate labor force. To conclude, with joint effort of people and government, I am sure the traffic problems will be improved.

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