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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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From the table above, we can see that the growth of the income and level of education has a great connection, first of all, the ordinary university graduates earn more than a typical high school graduates. By the fact that these data reveal obvious: degree can indeed bring different degrees of economic benefits. However, a single degree can make sure you have a good future? I don't think so, because on the one hand, the financial value of higher education largely depends on the personal skills rather than degree graduates. After all, an employer will only pay for your ability and performance, not your certificate. Higher education brings the gift of maximum value, on the other hand, is a graduate of the learning ability of fast and efficient. The education is more

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