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字数：300 满分：100分
句式变化较丰富，但文中有句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。
to me ,as a student,i think we should try our best to save the meney .all we do to help our save meney can make us became a smart consumer .for example ,collect the coupous and buy the thing what you need in sale .it can help me build a good habit to save . the coupons remind me the mamery of my phone which i bought it last year when i went into collage .when i was in high school i just did not treast the coupons and just buy every thing i need in shop without any coupons .then i found my classmate also had a same phone with me .it is important that his is much cheaper than me because he just used the coupons . fanally in a word,i think whatever we can do to save meney can make ue became a smart consumer .by the way ,the qulity of the things what you want are also an important way to effect the prices
