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字数：300 满分：100分
能够使用一些不错的从句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
As a student,I think we should try our best to save money.All we can do to help us to save money can make us became a smart consumer.For example,collect the coupous and buy the thing what you need when they are in sale.It can help us to build a good habit to save money. The coupons reminds me the mamery of my phone which i bought it in last year when i went into collage.When i was in high school i just did not treast the coupons and just buy every thing i need in shop without any coupons.Then i found my classmate also had a same phone with me.It is important that his is much cheaper than me because he just used the coupons. Fanally in a word,i think whatever we can do to save meney can make us became a smart consumer.By the way,we could not use the money we use to justy a man is a smart consumer.
