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字数：300 满分：100分
能够使用一些不错的从句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇，但请认真检查词汇的拼写。
As a student,I think we should try our best to save money.All we can do to help us to save money can make us became a smart consumer.For example,collect the coupous and buy the thing what you need when they are in sale.It can help us to build a good habit to save money. The coupons remind me the memory of my phone which I bought it in last year when I went into collage.When I was in high school I just did not treast the coupons and just buy every thing I need in shop without any coupons.Then I found my classmate also had the same phone with me.It is important that his is much cheaper than me because he just used the coupons. Fanally,I think whatever we do to save meney can make us became a smart consumer.By the way,we could not use the money we use to justy a man is a smart consumer.
