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字数：300 满分：100分
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As a student,I think we should try our best to save money.Whatever we do to save money can help us became a smart consumer.For example,collect the coupons and buy the thing what you need in discount.It can help us to build a good habit to save money. The coupons remind me the memory of my phone which I bought it in last year when I went into collage.When I was in high school I just did not treast the coupons and just buy every thing I need in the shop.However,then I found my classmate had the same phone.It is important that his is much cheaper than me because he just used the coupons. Fanally,I think we should try our best to save money to become a smart consumer.By the way,we could not use the money we use to judge a man whether or no smart consumer.
