2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? In the past, children are always independent.With the financial development,most parents focus on giving comfort to their children.So,their children are not independent. It is important that being independent for the children.In order to be independent,parents should let their childen do what they want to do.On the one hand, parents should not help their children what they can do.Parents should make a decition that never to help them.For example：do some housework， homework and so on.On the other hand, parents should let their children live in school when they are attended school. Even,parents can let their children travel by himself.Finally,if parents want their children to be independent absolutely,can they leave to other place for some times. I think that parents let their children be independent since they are young.