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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

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We should maintaining trust each other whatever comes,nowadays ,that's inadequate for us.Why people cann't maintaining trust each other ? We can find many examples from newspaper or watch them from TV,there we explain the reason from an example ,last year,when i went to school and found a older sit down the street ,she seems has been hit by something,so ,i considered if i should bring she go to hospital,finally ,i do that.But i had beed cheated by her which make me lose trust to people .And now ,i always maintaining trust each other ,why? The reason is very simple ,i believe the kind people more than the unkind people ,and almost people who i have met is very nice ,and that will make us live more confortable ,and make more friends. On maintaining trust is needed but the same time we should serious to know people .

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