题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇。
We should on maintaining trust each other whatever comes,nowadays,that's inadequate for us.Why people cann't maintaining trust each other? We can find many examples by newspaper or watch them from TV,there we explain the reason from an example ,last year,when I went to school and found an older sit down the street ,she seems has been hit by something,so,I considered if I should bring she go to hospital,finally ,I do that.But I had been cheated by her which make me lose trust to people .And now ,I always maintaining trust each other ,why? The reason is very simple ,I believe the kind people more than the unkind people ,and almost people who i have met is very nice ,and that will make us live more confortable ,and make more friends. On maintaining trust is needed but the same time we should seriously know people .