题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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As the high speed development of economy and technology ,people who lived around us seems become suspicious day by day . Some one said they can not believe in their neiborhood anymore as they know each other less and less.some others thought it is no use that on maintaining trust because there are fakes everywhere,don't believe in anyone is the best way to keep safe. May different people have different ideas just like there are thousands of hamrate inthousands of person's mind.but in my oponion,i think trust is one of the most precious treasure in our life.only with the trust can we face the life in a kind heart .i can sharing my secret with friends,travelling with strangers,eating food in the resterant an so on .can you imagine a kind of life without trust and just live on youself? i can't.