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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2997
要求:
题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以;能够使用一些不错的从句。

用户练习作文:

Everyone wants to make a success in their life.So they go to find a way, which can make them get a success easily,such as studying hard,learning from others and doing more research . There are many ways to success, as if you really make you effort to do your things. in my opinion,I think hard-working and insists are the essential way to success.First,when you want to achieve you goals ,you must work hard on it and do many research in it ,although the tasks are very boring and they are difficult.Secondly,is the insist.when you meet the troubles ,you can't lose your confident and continue to do it.What's more,you should have a clear view in your task.

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