2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

Nowdays,there is many on excessive packaging in goods or foods.But as we know,sometimes it will waste many resorce.Depenging on my own experience ,such follows reasons. Firstly ,many of those reason why on excessive packaging are many sellers were glad to absorb customer's good impression ,secondly, which is to add its price ,due to on excessive packaging,for seller it can be a good excuse .Lastly but not least,many customers would more keep eye on its face ,no matter how lower than its quality. To sum ,as far as I am concerned,it is bad for our profit,especially,as buyer is the god.So ,it is high time for us to protect our profit.we should open our eyes to choose high quality.