英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:47浏览次数:1092
要求:
Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 
1.有的人认为应该有回报 
2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报 
3.我的看法 
用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,a heated discussion about a subject that "should one expect a reward when doing a good deed" is to hold in our class.Different people claim their different ideas. Some people hold the opinion that expect a reward when doing a good deed.A reward even like "thank you"is meaning a great support to our friendly behavior,which also encourage us to do more helpful things.On the contrary,others insist that we should not accept others'reward while helping them.Giving a hand when somebody in a dilemma is just show our loves automatically rather than for the purpose of praising.Although we haven't been named by people,the state of mind is enhanced. As far as I am concerned,we are supposed to help others who face difficulties no matter getting a reward or not.

会员评论0个评论)
薄荷糖1
金币:32

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:83.5loveym

人气:57发布:2014-04-09

得分:83.0aishuang2012

人气:222发布:2013-05-17

得分:81.0yxcqnu

人气:48发布:2016-06-27

得分:80.5a569043015

人气:37发布:2016-04-04

得分:79.5jieersodagreen

人气:70发布:2016-06-26