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Nowadays,a heated discussion about a subject that "should one expect a reward when doing a good deed" is to hold in our class.Different people claim their different ideas. Some people hold the opinion that expect a reward when doing a good deed.A reward even like "thank you"is meaning a great support to our friendly behavior,which also encourage us to do more helpful things.On the contrary,others insist that we should not accept others'reward while helping them.Giving a hand when somebody in a dilemma is just show our loves automatically rather than for the purpose of praising.Although we haven't been named by people,the state of mind is enhanced. As far as I am concerned,we are supposed to help others who face difficulties no matter getting a reward or not.
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