可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;请注意分段。
I am fond of English,but I am not good at it.Beacause I am not interested in English in school.I am so regret for waiting a lot of time to fool around in that time.Now,I want to make it right byl spending a lot of time to study English.The fact is corul,however,I had to work all day to making a living.