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2007年12月英语四级作文真题:致欢迎辞

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:09浏览次数:1490
要求:
1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课   
2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课   
3、以你自己为例……
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学术词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Recently, the issure to choose electives has been brought into public focus.More and more college students want to enhance more knowledge and make their capus life more colorful. There are various reasons responsible for this phenomenon.For one thing, some students intend to choose what they are interested in.What's more,,it benefits from themselves and broden their horizon.For another, as many students can focus on their professional subject and ignore their hobbit.So they can learn more what they like through this way .Not only can they reap the benefit from electives but aslo widen their knowledge and enrich their experience. I think it is of significant for college students to choose electives.Because i like reading literature and take advantage of this opportunity, i can gain more information.In conclusion, we should attach important to this chance and put emphasis on learning.

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