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Recently, the issure to choose electives has been brought into public focus.More and more college students want to enhance more knowledge and make their capus life more colorful. There are various reasons responsible for this phenomenon.For one thing, some students intend to choose what they are interested in.What's more,,it benefits from themselves and broden their horizon.For another, as many students can focus on their professional subject and ignore their hobbit.So they can learn more what they like through this way .Not only can they reap the benefit from electives but aslo widen their knowledge and enrich their experience. I think it is of significant for college students to choose electives.Because i like reading literature and take advantage of this opportunity, i can gain more information.In conclusion, we should attach important to this chance and put emphasis on learning.
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