2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

My views on Online Shopping As you known ,shopping online is a fashion ,many many people like shopping on the Internet more and more .That is a new way for every person to get lots of freedom form the traditional shopping ,which waste much time. Of course ,shopping online has many benefits ,you can get what you want without moving a step ,just staying at home,but like a coin has two sides ,the way you use has many problems ,your money,which is in your account of Internet ,facing without safety.You also can buy the goods that you do not want. On my opinions leave,I just want to tell you you need to be careful ,you need to get access into the famous Internet shops,also ,you need to be careful about your money.