2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Today,computer plays an extreme important role in our lives,and what's more ,we can't live happily without it who plays as an elemental material .It means that computer always influence us. Fristly,it makes man more convenient to do something like reading,writing and soluting problems.Sencondly,it dividing into Internet which can offer us chance to do something that is troublesome if we do go outside.For example,we can buy everything we need on darily days on line so that we don't need to claim for the traffic jams.And besides,we can solute some hard and boring problems by computer. However,just as the saying goes,every coin has tow sides,comeputer bring us some not good infulence ,too.On the one hand,it makes man lazy becasue of dependence on the computers.On the other hand,now more students are too crazing of playing computer games to making high scores on study. Shortly speaking,computer is a good material for helping us,but it is only a material,not everthings in our lives,so we shuold use it in a smart way.