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The impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication It is so quickly development time in the 21st that we can use many ways to communicate with others,for example,the Internet,the QQ,the weixin,the telephones and so on.So we are influence by Internet on many facts. It is convenient for us to communicate with others when and where we are not stay at together.We also can use the computer to look up the information which the previous .As an old saying goes"A coin has two sides".The Internet boosts distance on peoples.Many students,particularly high students,are on line all day or night that overlook some people around them. In a word ,the advantages is more than disadvantages which the impact of the Internet on Interpersonal communication.It will be better if we are more careful and communicate with others around us .
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