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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

The impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication It is so quickly development time in the 21st that we can use many ways to communicate with others,for example,the Internet,the QQ,the weixin,the telephones and so on.So we are influence by Internet on many facts. It is convenient for us to communicate with others when and where we are not stay at together.We also can use the computer to look up the information which the previous .As an old saying goes"A coin has two sides".The Internet boosts distance on peoples.Many students,particularly high students,are on line all day or night that overlook some people around them. In a word ,the advantages is more than disadvantages which the impact of the Internet on Interpersonal communication.It will be better if we are more careful and communicate with others around us .

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