2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

There is an inevitable phenomenon that the relationship between man and computer is getting closer and closer.As the society develops,people rely on computer in every region.As a result,we are influenced by it.Gradually,the way to think is as same as the computer.We ought to be cautious that the trend is negative. The progress of computer thinking is designed step by step.Once it goes wrong,the whole program is useless.If we think like this,it requests us not make an mistake.It is impossible for us.As we know,computer is machine without emotion.The result after thinking is only data、words or pictures and so on.However,people are perceptual.We think emotionally other than systematically.Man thinking like the computer is supposed to be cold-blooded and ruthless,which is lacking in community of emotion and harms our relationship.There is no point in thinking like the computer mechanically. But everything has two sides.What we should learn is to think scrupulously and logically like the computer.In conclusion,keeping up the advantage of people thinking and absorb the strength of computer thinking counts most.