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Nowadays,with the development of information technology,there is a growing number of e-books aroused people's attention. Some people insist that E-books will take the place of traditional books,the reason why that is more convenient to bring and read e-books while traditional books need more large room to place.In addition,the money spent in purchasing e-books is far less than traditional books.On the contrary,others hold the opinion that traditional books can't be placed by e-books.You are able to write down your feeling of the sentence that lead you to think deeply or fleeting inspiration and that can't apply to e-books.Moreover,you can conserve books as special treasure to hand down. As far as I am concerned,e-books won't replace traditional books.Only if the e-books and traditional books are all boosting,we can widen our view and take up more knowledge.
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