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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；简单的使用了一些复杂句，但从句使用不充分；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，单词拼写要认真；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
More and more people surge into large cities in puisuit of a better life, but to their disappointment, they find that life in large cities is not such great as they imagine. Their dissatisfaction with the quality of life large cities may be ascribed to several reasons.Firstly, the environment hazards have reached such proportions that
