2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(10):古今中国音乐的发展

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Traditional Chinese Music is much different from Modern Chinese Music,which is profoundly influenced by Western music.As many other ancient national music,Traditional Chinese Music is unique, either in theory or in instruments.It's mainly created by minstrel who hired by the imperior court,and played in the palace for emperor and his kins. Nowadays,music is enjoyed by common person.There are many kinds of music,such as Pop music,rock music,folk music,Hip-hap,and so-called Red song,which is about prasie and advocacy of red party.Modern music is performed with some modern instruments:guitar,drum,keyboard,piano,etc. You can listen to it on the tv,or radio,network,even a live show in a bar. Music can soothe one's soul,let's enjoy it!