初中英语命题作文真题演练(97):华南虎

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recently the numeber of the south china tiger is becoming fewer and fewer .the main reason is that people's hunting .so they have become very endangeredand people also realized the importance of saving them .so people use all kinds of solutions to save them .for example Baishanzu National Nature Reserve,Zhejiang.since then ,the situation have become better and better.before saving them thenumber of them is very few .after that ,it has about 30-60.i hope that people can do something to save them .