单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Johnny goes to School on foot every day. There are many buses, cars and bicycles in the street. Every day at seven o’clock Johnny waits for a blind man at the crossing. He helps the blind man go across the street and then says goodbye to him. What a good boy.