2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

As we all known, computer become more and more popular in our daily life.Without computers, our lives will lose its color. Computer makes our lives convenient especially. First of all, we can use computer to complete some works which hard for people. Such as the techknowlege computing.Then, Using computer, we can shop without we go out of the door. As a survey shows recently, more and more young people buy their nessessary products on the online instead of go out shopping.Finally, computer can make people communication easily. We can contact our friends on the internet without the limit of space. We can conclude easily that without computer, our life will become duck.