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Nowadays more and more people choose cars as traffic ways. But in the last few years, scientists find out that the carbon in the oil we are using in the car now is polluting the environment as well as makes our city hotter. In the other hand, cars make our lives more convenient and speed our life so as to have more thing to do in the same time. Generally, cars can make our life better if we use it in a good way.
