2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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The education is very importing in every city . in fact ,the education lead to people develop .the people made more and more schools. The schools educating our to study .but people learn to study different subjects of myself interesting. people study different subject lead to do different work in the future.As society develops people are attaching much importance to education.