句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇表达不够多样,希望能多使用学术词汇;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
On the importance of a name Does a name matters? What is name used for ?Is it relate to our daily life ?Different people have different opinions. Many people think a name is very important in both our daily life and career .If you have a good name, it is easier for people to remember you and have a deep impression on you .The next time they see you ,they can recognize you and you will have more opportunities than others .A good name also can decide your fate .Good name can bring your good luck ,many people believe that . However,others does not think name is important .They treat name just as a signal of oneself.A name is used for define who you are or what people call you .It has no relation between work or life . In my opinion ,name is not very important .Luck and career are not decided by name ,but by your effort and preparetion .