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As we all know, pollution has been becoming the most serious problem that human beings must face. Pollution is around us but sometimes we can't find it out. When I was walking along the river, I often see some chemical factories polluting the water. This has caused several fish living in the water die. White pollution is also a big trouble we should solve. In my opinion, we can reduce the pollution in some ways. For example,I suggest that the person who is in the charge of the environment should require the firms to pay a bill about pollution. We can choose clothing bags instead of plastic bags to solve the white pollution as well. In a word, if everyone can try his best to protect our environment, the environmental pollution will be worked out.
