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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；熟练使用了一些长难句；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；请注意分段。
With the approach of Senior 3 studies, students in the second half of Senior 2 are under increasingly great pressure, which has affected some students’ life,causing them to sleeplessness,and ill-hearth.Don't let the pressure drag you down,my friend,here is some advice for you.First,don't exhaust yourself by long-time study without rest,try to find a balance point between them.Second,healthy diet is of great benefit to you in supplying adequate nutrient which is necessary for metabolism of your body,eat less junk food and consume more vegetable,fish,egg,etc.Third,keep fit if you don't want to be overweight,doing some exercise regularly,suck as football,basketball,tennis,jog,to name a few. Of course,good health means not just being physically healthy but also mentally healthy.keep your mind optimistic and positive,thus you will never succumb to great difficulty in your life.
