2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；可适当增加从句的使用，注意几处句子错误；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。

human and computer in the modern society,science developing more and more fast.especially,for example e-industrial.in 20th century,man invented computer ,and it take industrial evolution to make our life that get easier and comfortable. to after 90th youth,we do everything by computer,as make friends with all over the world,and e-shopping for instance,to go shopping into taobao internet,to dangdang internet for buying book,and we could study online for tele-study. but many youth use internet for game and skip some junk internet.these are disadvantage -s what computer takes.they could make these boys and girls abandon their works ,so they will miss the chance to study in high school,even college.that not only is unlucky for the youth,but also the family,even so the nation. at last,the computer takes more advantage than disadvtangs.