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In modern society,dishonesty phenomemon still exists.However,as we all know, honesty is one of a traditional virtue in China.It is to us,what sunshine is to flower.Without it, our society would lose control. So important is the honesty that we should spare no effort to be a man with it.I know if a man without honest virtue his/her life is pity.Take my classmate Lily for example.Once Lily went to a shop to buy something,when she noticed the shopkeeper was packing up things,she rushed a mind to steal a book.However,she was caught by the shopkeeper and was known to the neighborhood for her dishonesty.We can learn from Lily that dishonest behavior would have a bad influence on your life,which is not beneficial to you at all.Therefore,no matter what we do,we should be an honest man. Honesty is beneficial to ourselves as well as others.It is very necessary for us to be the honest.In order to reach this,some useful measures we can take.First of all,we should form a good habit of doing honest thing.Do not stealing things on any occasion.Besides,having a good virtue.Last but not least, study hard and equid ourself with knowledge.If we do as above,I Believe that we must can be a better man. Finally,honesty plays a significant role in our Chinese tradition virtues.Therefore,everyone should be a honest man and does honest things.Only in ths way can our society becomes more and more beautiful and wonderful.