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With the development of the Internet and technology,shopping online has became a fashion.More and more peopleare prefect to shopping on line. As we all known,shopping online has many advantages.it can saves us troubles of going outside as well as save us more time.However,every coin has two sides.Shopping online also has many disadvantages.On the one hand,some sellers are not enough honest and maybe he will cheat us,after all,he is not our family.On the other hand,maybe we will buy something fake and we can not ask help from the police.How pity things!What's more,If we were shopping online,the store will wide up. As far as I am concerned,we ought to treat it retionaly.If we have no time indeed,we can buy someting online.On the contrary,we should go out to shopping more often.
