内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化。
Hearing from you again. I am very surprised.its really long time since last lettter,it doesn't matter about this,actually I have not use the email for one and half a year,A year ago,I quit my job , decorated the house,got married. this time I am very busy with my life as you haha. Before I heard that you live in the capital city of Malaysia that I've been dreaming to go to there. This is what I aspire to a place