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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；增加一些从句的使用。
Hello there yunny88, How are you? hope your doing well in China. Its been > a while since I email you..I think its been a long long time to response > back and I apologize for that. I've been really busy with my lately and now > its seems the tide have calm a little bit. > > So how are you doing right now? how was you New year vacation? hope you > have a blast with your vacation, hows work? hope you not busy as me.. > > this is all for now maybe we can continue talk later..ask me anything if > you would like to know about me? maybe we can exchange story later on. Have > a good day..
