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英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写邮件

发布时间:2013-05-23 22:10浏览次数:14155
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说明:假定你是胡斌,根据下列内容写一封邮件。 
发信人E-mail地址:hubin@163.com 
收信人E-mail地址:KPOHsales@hotmail.com 

内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。

【高频词句】 
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书 
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系

用户的作文(系统评分46.5分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;有句法错误,句子形式单一。

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Hello there yunny88, How are you? hope your doing well in China. Its been a while since I email you..I think its been a long long time to response back and I apologize for that. I've been really busy with my lately and now its seems the tide have calm a little bit. So how are you doing right now? how was you New year vacation? hope you have a blast with your vacation, hows work? hope you not busy as me.. this is all for now maybe we can continue talk later..ask me anything if you would like to know about me? maybe we can exchange story later on. Have a good day..

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