2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man Nowadays,the computer has become a part of human's life.People use it do many things and almostly can't live without it. As a coin has two sides.The computer has really do us many help.For one thing,the computer connect the world together and we can know what happened wherever in the world in no time.For another thing,the computer speed the development of the world's economy and make our life more convinent.But it also has its disadvantages,like too many people too rely on it lead them lose their indivuality