2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

Computer and Man Nowadays,the computer has become a part of human's life.People use it do many things and almost can't live without it. As a coin has two sides.The computer has really do us much help.For one thing,the computer connect the world together and we can know what happened wherever in the world in no time.For another thing,the computer speed the development of the world's economy and make our life more convenient.But it also has its disadvantages,like much people rely on it too much that lead them lose their individuality.