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The impact of the internet on interpersonal Communication As the technology keeps developing,internet becomes an indispensable part of our daily life .Once you open your eyes in the morning,you are going to be connected with internet.In school ,teachers use internet to help them do their work efficiently.By internet,students can understand the subject better.People also use internet in their work. However,as more and more people using internet in their daily life ,the distance between person and person becomes further.Instead of talking face to face ,people are conveying their idea through internet.There is no need for people to go outside ,or to meet someone .Internet can do what they want .Thus lead to the unpleasant interpersonal Communication.
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