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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些学术词汇；可适当增加从句的使用；结构不严谨，行文不流畅；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Hi, It's a great pleasure for me to write you here.I saw your company new product named 5670 on exhibition during Dec 15th to 22 in New York.and I am quite interested in it.I wonder if you could send me a price list and instruction about it and that would be a great help to us. Thankyou for your help.We hope we can establish business relationship. best regards! Liz
