小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Good friend I have a good friend ，her name is call QT We are in the primary school and childhood partner， She has a long black hair very pretty Now， she is a teacher， work in the hight school But she does not like the job , sometimes make her boring. She could not find something to feeling interesting, so she is annoyance We always in the qq online to talk everything. Like gossip, star,China TV,joking esc.... In the china , if you work in school .hospital,bank The means you are good student. 24th april