题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;请作者增加词汇表达的灵活性,拼写检查也还需加强;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段。
nowaday,we do not trust each other like before.we do not say the really words.and many people prevent to someone who lie to them possible.why do not like the before,trusting other people.on maintaining trust to each other our lives will become more relax, with full of delight. on maintaining trust can bring a lot of convient,such as we can be sure to give the work to employee.