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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1771
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题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
字数:150满分:100分
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作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;采用了一些简单的从句。

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a legend life equal to an fabulous name? well, It's a good question discussed severly on the internet in recent days. some persons says name is important if you want a successful life, and they can give many cases to prove their point. However, the other persons say It's irrelevant to a wonderful life. It's whatever you think . You maybe strive more hard when you thought you can be a miracle of you have a different name.Or you can do your best in your life with nothing. It;s decided in your deep heart. And the result is you purchase a perfect life by working hard. In my opinion, your minds and take actions is the basic element form your great life. how about a great name? there only a president in many man named obama. And in the end you must create a super name in your life through your hard working.

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